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fma_100 "contest entry" Focuses on Roy.

Rating:G
Title: Sound of Thunder
Theme: Fear

When Roy was young, a little child, he was afraid of storms. As the first lightning struck the sky, he hid beneath his blanket. His small body shivered from fright and he flinched every time he heard the loud thunders. Even his voice died so no matter, how he wanted to scream for his mother, he couldn’t.
But his fear turned burning anger through the years and finally, it vanished. He began to listen to the sound and learned to laugh into the face of the storm.
He became a soldier and soldiers are not afraid of sounds. Bang, bang.

Whaddaya think? XD I appreciate delightful squeals, contructive criticism and Beta-reader offers.

Date: 2004-10-29 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nalavashi.livejournal.com
Oooh... deep, I like it. ^^ Now I have the image of chibi Roy hiding under blankets stuck in my head. XD

Date: 2004-10-31 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com
That's not that bad, or is it...? XD

Date: 2004-11-11 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kira-k.livejournal.com
Bang, bang.

Yes, that's my Roy. *Hugs Roy* You're good at this, did I tell you? :)

Date: 2004-11-11 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com
I'm glad thst somebody had noticed the last two words.

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