...I love this fic. I've read it three times already. XD
I think you used too many commas sometimes, though. But otherwise this fic is awesome. ^_^ I like the image you created in the beginning about the party especially, and the last line. ...And of course everything in between. XD
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Date: 2005-06-25 03:02 pm (UTC)I think you used too many commas sometimes, though. But otherwise this fic is awesome. ^_^ I like the image you created in the beginning about the party especially, and the last line. ...And of course everything in between. XD