I'm tempted to write a death!fic with captured, but not-broken Riza, but I don't think it would be much success...
*grins* Do try. Who knows, you might like her and her undaunted personality after that. ( I can hear someone murmuring the words "dream on".)
No,no,no. I'm not telling you to rewrite it. My intention was to point out what I thought could be improved in your writing so that the next time you write another fic, you can take my suggestion into consideration. ^^
Haha, Orwell's books can be boring and confusing the first time you read them. It might be the fact that they revolve round politics. But the reason why I recommended Animal Farm was because I thought it was cute. I'm a weird girl... so your opinion might not be the same as mine... You will find that Susan Hill's writing is rather dark and sinister plus disturbing in some aspects. ( I'm side-tracking here but 4 years of literature can cause a person to become a literature-freak. So, do you read Shakespeare?) Good luck in your quest to search for those books!
True that you won't know who's lying and who's not... thus the bio's a little useless if you really want to know a person...
Everyone is given an equal chance in doing anything. It's your own choice: to take or leave it, so you shouldn't say that you have "no real chance" of being something if you really have a passion for it. >=D
P.S. I'm really curious about one thing, so humour me. Do you read the fma manga?
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Date: 2005-04-30 02:11 am (UTC)*grins* Do try. Who knows, you might like her and her undaunted personality after that. ( I can hear someone murmuring the words "dream on".)
No,no,no. I'm not telling you to rewrite it. My intention was to point out what I thought could be improved in your writing so that the next time you write another fic, you can take my suggestion into consideration. ^^
Haha, Orwell's books can be boring and confusing the first time you read them. It might be the fact that they revolve round politics. But the reason why I recommended Animal Farm was because I thought it was cute. I'm a weird girl... so your opinion might not be the same as mine... You will find that Susan Hill's writing is rather dark and sinister plus disturbing in some aspects. ( I'm side-tracking here but 4 years of literature can cause a person to become a literature-freak. So, do you read Shakespeare?) Good luck in your quest to search for those books!
True that you won't know who's lying and who's not... thus the bio's a little useless if you really want to know a person...
Everyone is given an equal chance in doing anything. It's your own choice: to take or leave it, so you shouldn't say that you have "no real chance" of being something if you really have a passion for it. >=D
P.S. I'm really curious about one thing, so humour me. Do you read the fma manga?