do you mind if I add my 2 cents? I partially agree with your overall correction, minus a few things there and there. For instance, the guy's left arm was fine the way it was actually, it renforces the care he shows for the girl by letting her the possibility to get closer to him. The perspective is quite correct here. (minus the lack of mussles here lol~~) The left hand would be better a little bit going on her hips, just making the arm shorter would have been fine. The lower part of the body is not in the same perspective as the upper part, if you see what I mean. Nothing to say about the original right hand, it was just fine the way it was.
I don't find the words to explain what I would about the right arm tho', the angle is possible only if the guy was ~1cm farther (?! can i use this word?) -on paper, not reality- and of corse, raise a bit the arm by the same time. I think lol
(his ass is way too big for a man, also, but I'll skip on this lol)
This was my last 2cents of the day! Hope this wasn't too rude, I just wanted to express my opinion here :))
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Date: 2010-02-02 11:45 pm (UTC)I partially agree with your overall correction, minus a few things there and there.
For instance, the guy's left arm was fine the way it was actually, it renforces the care he shows for the girl by letting her the possibility to get closer to him. The perspective is quite correct here. (minus the lack of mussles here lol~~)
The left hand would be better a little bit going on her hips, just making the arm shorter would have been fine.
The lower part of the body is not in the same perspective as the upper part, if you see what I mean.
Nothing to say about the original right hand, it was just fine the way it was.
I don't find the words to explain what I would about the right arm tho', the angle is possible only if the guy was ~1cm farther (?! can i use this word?) -on paper, not reality- and of corse, raise a bit the arm by the same time. I think lol
(his ass is way too big for a man, also, but I'll skip on this lol)
This was my last 2cents of the day!
Hope this wasn't too rude, I just wanted to express my opinion here :))