Sooooo good~! O___o Like Roy and Maes can't think anymore at the end of chapter two, I don't think I can do that either now, after two chapters of good Roy/Hughes smut. *sighs happily* You two are so good at this, you know. I can normally come up with a better comment, but I really think my brains have been shut down by the pleasure of reading this. There were so many good moments, good sentences in the two chapters... And the end of chapter two was so... *little hearts start to float around her* ... I need more...? But that'll come tomorrow, before it definitely kills my brains. ^^;

There were two words I spotted that had to be corrected, however. I hope you don't mind I point them out. ^^;
First of all, someone had "oasises". Uhm... that should be "oases". ^^; Don't ask me why.
Secondly, that was with Roy, that he shouldn't behave like a "three-years old". That should've been "three-year-old" and you can add child behind it, but that is not necessary. ^^;;

Awesome story!