But first of all this is not Roy who rapes Riza, but Zolf J. Kimbley, the Crimson Alchemist. Big difference. And there is not one author, but two. Thank you for remembering me, it always warms my heart.
Style, description and bluntness. Partly you're right, but as for the other part... "People would take a second glance at your story, to appreciate what exactly you are talking about."
If you read the story, you know Riza fought back. If some people ignored those lines, I doubt, rewriting their wrestling into a four-pages-long part would really help these people to care about what we meant.
And your other comment. Style is something you can't learn in the classical meaning. You develop your own style and it grows and alters with you. We know this.
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But first of all this is not Roy who rapes Riza, but Zolf J. Kimbley, the Crimson Alchemist. Big difference.
And there is not one author, but two. Thank you for remembering me, it always warms my heart.
Style, description and bluntness. Partly you're right, but as for the other part... "People would take a second glance at your story, to appreciate what exactly you are talking about."
If you read the story, you know Riza fought back. If some people ignored those lines, I doubt, rewriting their wrestling into a four-pages-long part would really help these people to care about what we meant.
And your other comment. Style is something you can't learn in the classical meaning. You develop your own style and it grows and alters with you. We know this.