ext_201728 ([identity profile] pockygirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] okami_hu 2005-12-29 01:28 pm (UTC)

really can't help you with excess commas, i'm comma-happy myself. verb tenses and using the right words and word order are edited though. ^^
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