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okami_hu ([personal profile] okami_hu) wrote2005-01-26 06:56 pm

Drabble challenge: Kill

Last man standing

They both knew that they’ll die. But they didn’t mind it. They were prepared for it and they knew that their death will save the one, they swore to protect.
Roa brawled with Gluttony and he didn’t even scream, when the Sin bit off his hand. He raised his hammer to crush the devil but it was faster than anyone could imagine and launched towards the giant’s stomach.
Dolchet’s lungs slowly filled with blood; the crimson liquid dripped down from Lust’s fingernails. The swordsman closed his eyes.
“Boss…”
Somewhere deep in the forest, a shiver ran down on Greed’s spine.

[identity profile] lenihanfighter.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
*shivers* Oh my god... That's... gloomy... but very well written, I think. You managed to write that missing scene where Dolchet and Roa fight against Lust and Gluttony very, very well. It was at least graphic enough to send a shiver down my spine while reading it.

[identity profile] butterfly-eli.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
They were both very honorable in that respect. I do like them dying with a sense of accomplishing their duty.

[identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Happy, that you liked! ^^

[identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I STILL oppose violently against the idea of Dolchet dying... although it's quite obvious. I can't do anything about it, I love that puppy to death... T_T

[identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com 2005-01-26 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
It's sad. But they died in a noble way indeed. *sniff* I miss you, guys...

[identity profile] lenihanfighter.livejournal.com 2005-01-28 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
*hugs* Don't worry, if you want to, I'll write a nice fic with Dolchet for you. ^^ Just as soon as I have finished with the rest of my projects. Oo;

[identity profile] okami-hu.livejournal.com 2005-01-28 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
The extended version of "Dog" will do perfectly... XD